I really like it Ruben, it clearly shows the story and his facial expressions are brilliant. I had trouble getting it below a minute too. Hopefully 20 seconds or so won't matter :)
This is great. (as I had expected it would be). The only thing I would change, (and Im not asking you to) is to cut the beginning down a bit. you say its 1 minute 20 seconds, you could probably cut some of that out of the beginning, as not much happens other than a lot of walking. The storyboards themselves are easyly readable and well drawn.
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I really like it Ruben, it clearly shows the story and his facial expressions are brilliant. I had trouble getting it below a minute too. Hopefully 20 seconds or so won't matter :)
Amazing Ruben - I was laughing all the time :D to laud though, my roommate is sleeping :D
That was really good :). Had to keep the laughter down so as not to wake the rest of the family
thanks, guys!
I cant wait to see yours. :)
This is great. (as I had expected it would be).
The only thing I would change, (and Im not asking you to) is to cut the beginning down a bit. you say its 1 minute 20 seconds, you could probably cut some of that out of the beginning, as not much happens other than a lot of walking. The storyboards themselves are easyly readable and well drawn.
thanks you ethan, that was a really helpful, i know already where to cut it :)
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