Le Patissier- Animatic Ver.1 with footage

After a lot of delay, I have been able to work on the animatic, by taking Alan's advice of using footage from other animations and films onto mine to use as a choreography for my piece, I began editing scenes that I felt that i wanted to add into the animation. So with no further ado here is the 1st version of the animatic.

I have added a few notes for more information.

 

 Meanwhile I have been working on the initial sound effects that will be added on the beginning of the animation, before the character enters the cake/ abstract world.

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Transcription: The Music of Erich Zann Final Animatic

Here is a quick update of the animatic with the extra line in the end, it definitely adds more mood and atmosphere  to the animatic and closes better the animation.

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Transcription: The Music of Erich Zann Latest Version Animatic

Over the past days I have been juggling work between getting the models done and the animatic, here is the latest version of the animatic.

I have taken some of the feedback and so far the story seems to be much more appealing within the 3 and half minutes time range.

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Transcription: The Music of Erich Zann 2nd Draft Animatic

So after sorting out the audio, i went on the tried to recreate a new animatic, with Phil's advice, I attempted to look at the story in a different way and create a animatic which basically will focus on the objective of the story and not all the elements and stages within it.

I think I'm going in a better way now, though It may still need some changes.

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