After receiving the feedback, it guided me to create a clear idea of what I am attempting to produce. Although, I haven't change drastically my idea, I tweaked to better show the purposed genre.
I took Phil's advice and actually changed the story structure, and after all it became more appealling in Sci-fi terms, also I edit the music, by adding 2 soundtracks and compose them together.
The New Animatic Version:
Here is the Storyboard Panels:
In the end, due to changing the story structure, I also shifted some scenes and added a new ones.