After receiving some feedback from Phil about the animatic, he mentioned that I should may get a voice over to describe what the narrator actually sees out of the window. So I emailed Robin Bowerman, asking If I could possibly have 1 extra line done.
He kindly replied after a few hours with 3 versions of the same narration, here they are:
Personally, I do like the 2nd version, as it really as a lot of emotion into the reading. Surprise and Fear.
What do you think ?
Lastly, I would like to thank again Robin Bowerman, for this extra favour.