After receiving some feedback from Alan on the previous design, I understood clearly what needed to be changed. In order of having the Young Man character and Erich Zann at the same style, I tweaked the face design of the young man. My intentions were to keep the logic of the character mentioned on the last post, the main points, such as ears and nose and then emphasise those shapes.
So I came up with this design:
The idea was to stylise the character but still keep it with a friendly face.