After today's feedback, I quickly got on and read the script over again. in the attempt to find some places that could be shrunk, for instance , maybe shots that would mean the same,or where I could use both the foreground and background to depict 2 shots. I tried to get the animation economically appealing and paced slightly faster, though always keeping the original story and its flow in mind.
So I can say I succeeded to bring the script down from 8 and a half pages to 7 and a half, where I fasten up the meeting of both characters, and began the action earlier. If any changes now occur, they will be done in the animatic stage.
With this accurate script of my idea,with camera angles and narration,I will be able to quickly draw the rest of the storyboard stills and then add them all into an animatic with sound.